Grammar — Empty subject
It is widely believed that / It is obvious that — chủ ngữ giả.
- It is widely believed that ...
- It is obvious that ...
- It has been argued that ...
Sports — empty subject & relatives
Tiêu chí: Grammatical Range and AccuracyLexical Resource
Lexical Resource và Grammatical Range chiếm 50% điểm Part 3. Empty subject và mệnh đề quan hệ giúp câu dài tự nhiên; từ vựng Sports nâng Band 7.
Grammar — Empty subject
It is widely believed that / It is obvious that — chủ ngữ giả.
Grammar — Relative clauses
..., which can lead to / ..., who engage in — nối ý phức tạp.
Lexis — Topic upgrade
Thay câu đơn bằng collocation: gender equality, male-dominated, sedentary, emerge.
Weak: Men and women like different sports. Strong: There are boundaries in male-dominated sports, but gender equality has helped new trends emerge — which reduces stereotypes.
It is widely believed that sports preferences differ by gender, which can lead to stereotypes. There are clear boundaries in male-dominated sports, but thanks to gender equality, new activities have emerged. People who engage in outdoor sports often avoid a sedentary lifestyle — a key distinction for urban Vietnam.
Competition is inherent in many sports.
Gender equality has changed participation.
A sedentary lifestyle overlaps with poor health.
Football remains a male-dominated sport in some regions.
New trends have emerged in fitness apps.